Feel free to comment on my story in the replies here.

Thanks, I am glad you're enjoying it. I too like where my story is going.

Regarding the main characters, so far I plan for Asmin, Ephemia and Erik to be the official main cast. I will do POVs of other supporting cast as well. Astragoth is the first.

Thanks for pointing out the error, I will correct it. I swear when I read my writing it looks right to me, but alas reality begs to differ.

Also, let me know if I make any inaccurate lore references. I will try to fit it within the lore of the series. Currently, I wonder how mana is generated in the Abyss without the element of water, with Mount Doom being the exception.

Yes, the friction of the five elements creates mana, so importing elements and animus to the Abyss is required. So would that mean the more barren areas of the abyss would be low on mana? Since they don't have all the five elements.

I am wondering if I should make it hard for Asmin to cast spells in the Abyss until he sets up something similar to Mount Doom. Or just has regular trips to Astlan. Haha. He could haul buckets of water into the abyss and try to cast spells with it.

Thanks for the correction, I always get tripped up on those kind of words. Not sure if it's auto correct or just muscle memory.

Glad to hear your enjoying the story. I am thinking of doing little short side stories as well to expand the lore and perhaps expand upon the main series lore.

Not sure whether or not to include them as interludes or a seperate collection story. I'll think about it.

She is adorable, don't you just want to give her a little dragon for her birthday.

Asmin could totally arrange that, would give her father a heart attack, but Gerald can heal him.

What do you think of my cover art?